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I'm trying to win a writing contest Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3730[View]

I'm trying to win a contest with this story:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/459238/interrogation-charm

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3750

Did you win?

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Moroccan Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3745[View]

Hello is there any Moroccan brony out there?
I can't believe that I'm the only one.

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I've never seen any from Morocco here to be honest.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3748

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You'd be the first person from Morocco that I've ever met here.

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Mlp story PrunellaCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3641[View]

Test
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Ecstatic!!eVA5nEl2JICountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3726

>>3725
Marvelous!

Mk17(phone)!!Trixie ## ModCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3729

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He has been banned. Sorry, i dont check this board a whole lot.
Thanks for the report.

Macaroni (Mobile) !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3762

Well then.

DarkReflect!ikwaNLFmBoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3727[View]

Up×all+night

Demi!rseWzArXrICountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3728

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>>3727
1% battery 🥥🍍🍇🍎

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3755

Ok.

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map of equestria and beyond
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3649

>>3631
Amazing work fam.

ZahtohCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3719

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I wish this was 1920x1080 because i'd use it as a background

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3723

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>>3631
high quality map

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Mod Thread AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3716[View]

Since you're all communists, you hate corporations, right? And you like giving shit for free? So you hate the fact that you need to show Paradox your Steam account to download mods from their stupid forum? If anyone doesn't mind sharing their account with Paradox, please upload this mod somewhere else: https://mlp-gaming.fandom.com/wiki/Victora_2:_Pony_Demand_Mod https://forum.paradoxplaza.com/forum/index.php?threads/the-pony-demand-mod-for-vicky-2.1112806/
Thank you.

Also general MLP mod thread. :3

Mint horseCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3717

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I didn’t expect to see this thread when lazily trying to click /oat/, but hey, I’m not complaining.

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Twilight Sparkle on Pixelbot 128 AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3696[View]

We are working on building Twilight Sparkle in PixelBot 128 to celebrate the show's run, and we need help to ensure that we finish it before the end of the month. It's a Facebook page, so if you have an account you can help. Any user can add up to two pixels to the image every hour. You add pixels to the next image the bot will post by commenting commands on the most recent picture uploaded by the bot. In the comments on the picture the bot will post instructions about how the commands work, but more importantly you should find a comment that links an google sheets file containing the commands for building Twilight. Please reply to that comment if you have any questions, or here if you can't get that far. Thanks!

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3714

...Is this even still going?

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Fanfiction relevance Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3685[View]

I've been thinking of an idea for a FiM semi-dystopian fanfic for some time now, but with the show ending, is it really worth it by now? I don't think I've ever even posted on this board before, but I figure you guys would know best.

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I was never into those kinds of stories but there still seems to be interest in pony fics from what I know. Of course, a few years back interest would have been much higher.

Macaroni (Mobile) !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3697

I mean, I'd probably read it.

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Crap, I was about to make a thread on this, but I forgot I had already made one. Oh well. So here's what I've got so far, but it isn't fully fleshed out yet, and I'm still not sure if it'll ever happen. If you know of any other fanfic writers, I'd like their input/advice too.

Background
The story takes place in the semi-distant future, but not like Star Trek or Fallout Equestria levels of future. At the same time, it's more than 20 minutes into the future. I guess you could say that it's like 20 years into the future, long after the show has ended. It would likely take place after most of the mane six, including Starlight Glimmer have passed away from natural causes. Princess Twilight is obviously still alive because she's an alicorn, and Spike is still alive because he's a dragon, though I'm not sure if he's going to appear that much.
At some point between the end of the show and the start of this story, the ability to synthetically create magic as a source of energy was discovered, advancing the possibilities of technology while at the same time, making unicorns borderline useless. It goes with the assumption that the semi-modern technology we see throughout the show, like cameras, EEG, etc, which would normally be powered by electricity are actually powered by subtle unicorn magic.
So with a mostly cheap form of easily accessible magical energy, this makes magicians, wizards, and unicorn labor in general borderline worthless, putting a lot of them out of work.
Story
Enter our main character, one such unicorn. Between the end of the show and the beginning of the story, synthetic magic vehicles have been invented and completely replaced pony drawn carts. Earth ponies and pegasi are mostly unaffected, but the new technology can help control the weather.
Another technology that has appeared between the end of the show and the start of the story is synthetic-magically powered computers, especially inexpensive personal computers.
After being laid off of her job, our "heroine" becomes a computer expert and becomes sort of a homeless hacker, a-la Adrian Lamo, minus the selling out/snitching part. She explores abandoned urban areas and uses her computer skills to hack into networks to survive.

And that's all I've got so far. I'm not sure what would happen next.
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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3551[View]

So, I did a little game. It's about horses. You pones like horses right?

Please throw rats in my game.

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/721929
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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3655

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>>3551
Okay, I love it.
First I was thinking, "Celestia, this game is boring."
Then came the first cinematic.
You really work a lot on this point, and the results are very good for this kind of game.
And the more I played, the more I saw cinematics, the more I understood.
It's not a game, it's some kind of an interactive experience.
Like a video but you gotta experience yourself that something won't lead you to happiness (the game part) and that you have to focus on something else (like Scoot). Items are useless, levels can go endlessly, and you keep dieing.
But it's a good thing.
"Errare humanum est, perseverare diabolicum"
Well done.

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3677

>>3551
Cool, reminds me of robot unicorn attack

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3682

>>3551
I'm guessing you'll never see this, OP, but it was a pretty nice game. Those cut scenes were kinda touching.

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Lyra's Human Weiners Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3583[View]

Not a NSFW clopfic, just a wack comedy story.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/429369/lyras-human-weiners
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3668

Just wait until Mint sees this.

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MLP Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3659[View]

MLPMLPMLP

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3660

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>>3659
Ah, did you draw this yourself?

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Pretty cute.

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my little pony team work that it i don't want to say more

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Is the fellow with the scarf a pony?

Mint horseCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3630

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>>3629
Looks like a hybrid between a dog and a pony.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3657

>>3628
Ok.
Why can't you say more?

Pre-reader 63.546"s Equestria Daily Feedback Thread Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 23[View][Last 50 Posts]

#Reviewer

As everyone should know by now, Equestria Daily has gone almost exclusively to short bullet-point reviews, except in cases where only a small number of items need to be corrected for posting. I enjoy giving longer reviews, but can no longer do so through Equestria Daily, so I will post them here. I will only do so for stories that in my estimation would have passed the old automoon system; others will get only the bullet-point treatment in the email.

This thread is only for the authors in question and me. They are free to ask questions or ask me to remove their reviews from the thread for any reason. For any other traffic, I will ask a mod to delete it. General questions about Equestria Daily or the pre-reading process should be posted here:
>>128414

Note that I won't give an exhaustive list of errors; I'll provide a representative list of the types of problems I find and leave it to the author to scour his story for the rest.

To avoid repeating myself, I'll post a few of the more common discussion topics up here; your review may refer you to one or more of these.

Dash and hyphen use:
Hyphens are reserved for stuttering and hyphenated words. Please use a proper dash otherwise. They can be the em dash (Alt+0151) with no spaces around it or en dash (Alt+0150) surrounded by spaces. Some usage (primarily American) employs only the em dash, while other usage (primarily British) employs an em dash for cutoffs and an en dash for asides. It doesn't matter which system an author uses, as long as he is consistent.

Comma use with conjunctions:
There may be other grammatical reasons to place commas, but in the simplest forms, commas accompany conjunctions to separate clauses, not to separate two items of a compound subject, verb, or object. The most common simple sentence forms are:
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Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3621

>>3620
Chapter 2:
As I continue on, I'm not going to keep pulling out examples of the same things I saw in chapter 1, so assume you still need to scan the whole story for the issues already noted.

>They silently hovered there, wings lightly buzzing//
If they're buzzing, they're not silent, are they?

>yet-still-concealing//
You only need that second hyphen.

>they’d ran//
run

>broodingly pondered//
The narrative voice is getting a bit off track again. You're using Dash as your perspective character in this scene—the narrator is essentially her train of thought. So she's the one making the word choices here, and this doesn't sound like something she'd come up with, especially in an off-the-cuff manner like this.
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Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3653

Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

Chapter 1:
>The human female//
He's been calling her by name in dialogue, so why is he referring to her like this in the narration, which is effectively his train of thought? You don't mentally use such references for acquaintances, do you?

>the dalek’s nerve-endings outraced the self-contained explosion that would immolate it; barely enough time to even register it.//
For a semicolon to be used right, you should be able to replace it with a period and have both resulting sentences stand as complete. What comes after it here would be a fragment.

>The pain didn’t last as long time//
Phrasing is off.

>And eventually, no doubt, tortured, as it had been by Van Statten.//
There are a few lines like this that are a bit problematic. It's tied to how you state in the opening author's note that the reader should have seen a particular Doctor Who episode before reading this, but that's not how we treat crossover stories. For our purposes, you should assume the reader has little to no knowledge of Doctor Who and write the story so someone like that could understand it. The beginning was fine. If I hadn't seen it, I wouldn't know who Rose was, but you talked through the circumstances enough that I have a little background about how long the war has been going on, and why this dalek is different. But here, I'm left completely on my own. Just give me a couple sentences about who Van Statten is and what he did.

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>>3653
Chapter 5:
>Soldier ran straight towards where the crystal that had once been the optical lens of her Mark-III travel machine, on the library’s table.//
That doesn't parse. The "where" clause doesn't have a verb.

You still have issues with whether you capitalize "travel machine" or add a hyphen after "Mark." Just go through the whole story for those.

>Staring into it, the ludicrousness of the situation and what she was doing finally occurred to Soldier.//
This says that the ludicrousness was staring into it.

>Twilight seemed utterly shocked//
How so? Let me see it and make my own judgment.

>“Except…” she looked back to Twilight, quieter.//
Non-speaking action used as a speech tag.
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Freshly published story: Supernova Daybreak Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3432[View]

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415153/supernova-daybreak

I'm trying to win a writing competition with this one.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3647

>>3432
...Did you win that competition?

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100% Buzzing Blueberry Drone Bugycorn of FOREST HIVECountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3521[View]

Yo, I am- makin a few furries from star trek in PONY TOWN

waiting... Until, they can use another game web 2 create furry dolls [within Game Boy Color design] I was- some into (Shantae) & (Lola Bunny) moments

http://kabelpodtehpony.deviantart.com

I created, an furrysona name E'Rokyta the Alien Lioness

If any, doodler ~ sketcher ~ drawer wanna do their own versions of my OC's/ you can for fun

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3532

Good to know.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3544

>>3534
Why?

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Rainstream's Art Thread RainstreamCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3372[View]

Huh, could have sworn I had an art thread around here somewhere. Eh whatever I never used it anyway. Must have gotten killed during the whole shift back in 2013. Geez I've been gone a while.
I'm in a concise mood.
I'mma make art and post it here.
Comment if you like it or give me critique and stuff. I've literally just started drawing 2 weeks ago so I need all the help I can get.
I take requests.
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>>3413
Yeah, that's my roommate. He went to bed about halfway through and he snores like a bear.

RainstreamCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3461

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I made an orcadragon OC.

Her name is Lydia.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3543

>>3372
>>3394
>>3461

Pretty good work.

Pinkie Drinks Monster [ANIMATION] AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3490[View]

Pinkie Drinks Monster [ANIMATION]

Pinkie Pie Drinks Monster [ANIMATION]

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3523

Sensible chuckle.

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Remembering: Sensual Stories Threads, The Collection SonicPony45Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3162[View]

Oh man, do I have a throwback post for you guys. Okay, a long time ago, back in the baby days of Ponychan, before the merger, before the drama and everything, this site used to be much larger with TONS of boards. It was litty. The year was 2011 and the Brony fandom was still in its infancy.

This board used to be called /fic/, because music, games and videos had their own boards. Me and a few other O.G's used to have a running thread called "Sensual Stories" thread. it was SO popular, we'd revise the thread everytime we reached 500+ posts. I mean, we were on like "Sensual Stories Thread #35" in just a few months, it was fucking huge.

The point was to create a single short story in as few posts as possible. Stories ranged from HOT to Awww and everything in between. They were romance stories, often told from 2nd person, and were very popular. We'd write our stories and review or critique each others work. It was awesome.

I made ALOT of friends on those sensual threads, and we accumulated many fans. We had haters who would tell us "clopping was wrong" and stuff, and it was understandable. See, this was back in the day when the creators of the SHOW would ACTUALLY come HERE to chat with us. We had artists, animators and even a few writers come to Ponychan and chop it up, so many were worried about what our stories were gonna do.

Anyway, the Sensual Stories Threads lasted for YEARS, but started dying in 2014~ When this site went redux, many boards got merged. Many cool secret boards and staff left (Staff used to be SO interactive with us, it was great), and them the merger happened and even more changed.

But my boi Sandman... he collected some of our FIRST works from the first 5 or so Sensual Stories Threads and put them in 6 PDF's. I literally made a DropBox account, JUST to share them. They have been in my SkyDrive (One Drive now) since 2012, and I just read some of our early works. He build a very nice book out of them, and added credits to the writers. It brought a tear to my eye as I read some of our works. I've been with this fanbase since day one and to see the names of all my fellow O.G's that are no longer on this site makes me miss the beginnings. Season 2 was still hyping up, Lauren Faust was still active on the show, this site had ALL the traffic, EQD was a fucking BABY site, bronies were SO creative, everyday was NEW user content. Music, flash games, animation and of course...sensual stories.. so here i
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>>3168

Yeah, its been a minute for me. This site is much slower than the old days. I've been away into the Navy. I'm finishing up and going to go to college. My life has Def changed. I went from gang banging to sailor and now college student.

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You still have them?! Dude, you rock!

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3522

>>3162
Boy, you sound like you had a great time I remember one fan-fic which was beyond awesome for me, called: "The Conversion Bureau: Ten Days".

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i did a thing Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 657[View]

i wrote a fanfic on dA that i hope to adapt into an animated series in the future (that's why it's written in a lovable script format) pls give me your feedback or else fluttershy will cri
http://datponeenthusiast90.deviantart.com/art/Decibelle-and-Gingerroot-Ep-2-ACT-I-538113930
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3082

>>659
Plebeian.

!RISkQqf4EMCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3265

holy shit a thread from 2015

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3519

>>3265
ikr

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applejack shakin her bum jacob foolsonCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2997[View]

lol i maid a pictuer! applejack is shaking her bum @ her sister applebloom.
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3005

Is this a new meme?

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3477

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Bloom's emotion here reminds me of this one.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3487

>>3477
Lel

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