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Spirit's Art & Commissions Spirit ShineCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3451[View]

Those of you who've been around for a long while might know that I used to like to draw a lot. Now that I'm done with school, I'd like to draw more often and professionally. If what I do interests you, please follow me on social media and consider commissioning me. Your support is greatly appreciated!

DeviantArt
Tumblr
Twitch
Patreon
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:c

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>>3472
No laugh, Spirit is love ;_;


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I couldn't think of a subject title, I am so sorry Will(Electro)Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3464[View]

So, I went to the Eddsworld tumblr account for the sake of nostalgia and I found quite the bizarre and lovely gem, which I wanted to share with you
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>>3468
No, It's just...this

I don't really get it

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Ah, long horse faces.

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>>3470

I just think Edd scares me now
Like how could he make something like mlp into something moderately unsettling


Pre-reader 63.546"s Equestria Daily Feedback Thread Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 23[View][Last 50 Posts]

#Reviewer

As everyone should know by now, Equestria Daily has gone almost exclusively to short bullet-point reviews, except in cases where only a small number of items need to be corrected for posting. I enjoy giving longer reviews, but can no longer do so through Equestria Daily, so I will post them here. I will only do so for stories that in my estimation would have passed the old automoon system; others will get only the bullet-point treatment in the email.

This thread is only for the authors in question and me. They are free to ask questions or ask me to remove their reviews from the thread for any reason. For any other traffic, I will ask a mod to delete it. General questions about Equestria Daily or the pre-reading process should be posted here:
>>128414

Note that I won't give an exhaustive list of errors; I'll provide a representative list of the types of problems I find and leave it to the author to scour his story for the rest.

To avoid repeating myself, I'll post a few of the more common discussion topics up here; your review may refer you to one or more of these.

Dash and hyphen use:
Hyphens are reserved for stuttering and hyphenated words. Please use a proper dash otherwise. They can be the em dash (Alt+0151) with no spaces around it or en dash (Alt+0150) surrounded by spaces. Some usage (primarily American) employs only the em dash, while other usage (primarily British) employs an em dash for cutoffs and an en dash for asides. It doesn't matter which system an author uses, as long as he is consistent.

Comma use with conjunctions:
There may be other grammatical reasons to place commas, but in the simplest forms, commas accompany conjunctions to separate clauses, not to separate two items of a compound subject, verb, or object. The most common simple sentence forms are:
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Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3364

Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

>She had done this?//

When you have a word italicized for emphasis, it's preferred to include an exclamation mark or question mark on it in the italics.

>That’s how long time had passed//

That's a strange phrasing. I've only ever heard it as "how much time."

>We only just got here?//

Why is this a question?

>Celestia lead Twilight//

The past tense is "led."

>Has something happened in Canterlot that ponies don’t know about.//

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Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3462

Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

This is something I caution many writers about: avoid "to be" verbs whenever you can, especially at the beginning and end of a story. Your first paragraph started out fine enough, with only one such verb through most of it, but then you pile up 4 more in the last few sentences. This creates a very stagnant feel right when you're trying to make your story look very interesting to a reader. Lots of times, it's not hard to rephrase. Take this sentence:
>That’s what my dad would have believed//
If instead you say:
>My dad would have believed that//
What do you lose? And it's more active language.

Then your second paragraph as one in its only sentence. The third paragraph is well done! But in the fourth, you're back at it, with 5 of them in just the first line.

So I guess Flash is bi? Because he was definitely flirting with Twilight in the first EqG movie.

>“By the way, Princess Twilight is gonna be coming down for a couple of weeks, so get ready to have Flurry stolen from you all the time,” Flash Sentry chuckled//

"Chuckle is borderline as a speaking verb, as it's intransitive, but at least keep it to what he would actually laugh while saying. In other words, keep the quote short for a verb like that. It feels very unnatural to have him chuckling out that entire thing.

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Pre-reader 63.546!vZ.Mh9z92UCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3463

Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

>As the charge nurse//

Pretty soon to repeat that already. I think readers will already pick up that you're talking about her duties here. It's like you're smacking the reader over the head and saying, "Hey! Notice this!"

So you have 3 paragraphs of intro material, and in it, you use 12 "to be" verbs. That's a very stagnant way to start your story. Not much is happening. I bet you can rephrase most of those with active verbs. The stretch starting with "If she had any strategies at all" through the end of that paragraph is actually pretty good. It uses active verbs for things that lots of people wouldn't as a reflex, and it makes for a much more interesting read as a result.

>“Aaugh!” The draconequus groaned//

I can't tell whether you meant that to be a speech tag. If so, it shouldn't be capitalized.

>could have sworn she hear her desk shrieking//

Typo.

>With Luna as her witness, Amethyst could have sworn she hear her desk shrieking in agony, cracking and shuddering under the strain; which wasn’t really surprising given that Discord’s dictionary was roughly the size of Harry the Bear.//

A semicolon should be used such that you could replace it with a period. What comes after it here couldn't stand as a complete sentence, though. A comma or dash would be fine there, depending on what rhythm you want.
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Rainstream's Art Thread RainstreamCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3372[View]

Huh, could have sworn I had an art thread around here somewhere. Eh whatever I never used it anyway. Must have gotten killed during the whole shift back in 2013. Geez I've been gone a while.
I'm in a concise mood.
I'mma make art and post it here.
Comment if you like it or give me critique and stuff. I've literally just started drawing 2 weeks ago so I need all the help I can get.
I take requests.
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It sounded like someone was snoring the whole time during the stream.

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>>3413
Yeah, that's my roommate. He went to bed about halfway through and he snores like a bear.

RainstreamCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3461

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I made an orcadragon OC.

Her name is Lydia.


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ponyinto.space Lex Rudera!rW/xyJMPOoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2729[View]

I need more images for the pointless site, http://ponyinto.space/
halp.
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NeoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3434

This is now my new desktop.

>>2742
FeelsBadMan

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>>2731

howz dis

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3453

>>3452
Mr. Sagan, is that you?


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Freshly published story: Supernova Daybreak Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3432[View]

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415153/supernova-daybreak

I'm trying to win a writing competition with this one.


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MLP - The Flutterby Effect AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3006[View]

I can't edit the thread title, but I've changed this to a general art thread.

Original description:
This is a fan project, so I thought it might be alright to post here; if it's not let me know! Sorry!

I'm working on a fan miniseries called the Flutterby Effect (working title), and am at the point where I need voice actors. (Not just the ones listed here, of course, but as far as the first episode, at least.)

There is a casting call here if anyone is interested! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M1Rm-8O3IiM Otherwise, feel free to just look at the attached image and hopefully enjoy it.
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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3020

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>>3010
Thank you for the kind words! I know I've still got some practicing to do, but I hope I'm getting there.

If a general art thread is indeed something that's alright for me to post here (and again, if I'm doing something wrong, I apologize!), here's something else I drew—a fusion of the pony princesses for a short story I wrote.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3022

>>3009
Your Luna is better than the canonical Luna.

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3431

Flutterby fluttershy
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Friendship is Pandering AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3079[View]

Hello this is a new parody series a friend of mine has been working on for a good while. He would love feedback. Of course not all will like this and that's understandable but do give it a chance. Thank you and I hope you enjoy.
https://youtu.be/WQlxzK06TfA
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3096

>>3087
This.

FipGuyCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3098

Glad you all like it so much! More is surely to come soon!

AustroSpikeCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3121

>>3098
Thank you and keep up the good work.


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applejack shakin her bum jacob foolsonCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2997[View]

lol i maid a pictuer! applejack is shaking her bum @ her sister applebloom.

!RISkQqf4EMCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2999

well done sir

8/10

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3005

Is this a new meme?

!PipesTtB.ACountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3228

>>2997
I will fund this as an animation


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MSpaint art requests Timekeeper!vLNCOxl8yMCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2076[View]

Yeah... Not much more to say. If I like the request, I'll take it.
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Timekeeper!vLNCOxl8yMCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3074

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Hey, OP here. I actually learned how to use the brushes in Win10 MSPaint. How have you all been?

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>>3074
Looking good.

Things have been rather quiet around here, as usual.

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3081

>>3074
Pretty good.


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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3050[View]

Hello my horses, I made a clicker. Please throw rats at it.

https://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/702875
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Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3076

>>3075
lmao

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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3086

https://youtu.be/UU5eJUl0WgA?t=16m32s

I can't embed the video sad horse


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i did a thing Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 657[View]

i wrote a fanfic on dA that i hope to adapt into an animated series in the future (that's why it's written in a lovable script format) pls give me your feedback or else fluttershy will cri
http://datponeenthusiast90.deviantart.com/art/Decibelle-and-Gingerroot-Ep-2-ACT-I-538113930
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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3080

>>657
im in love

Macaroni !RevGiOKgRoCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3082

>>659
Plebeian.

!RISkQqf4EMCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3265

holy shit a thread from 2015


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Desktop Ponies Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 458[View][Last 50 Posts]

8 bit ponies on your desktop.

Full Download (v1.63 released 2018-03-09)

Another year, another thread - and as always even more ponies than before (Old Thread >>45984).

Check out the deviantART community:
http://desktop-pony-team.deviantart.com

Also check out the OC thread for more ponies, and information about creating your own OCs:
http://www.ponychan.net/chan/collab/res/43607.html

Your can find the program source code on github:
https://github.com/RoosterDragon/Desktop-Ponies
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>>3423
Oh, I thought that was a teleporting Twilight playing a prank on you (transit.gif is a 1 pixel x 1 pixel sprite that could have easily hidden "behind" the reading Twilight at the time of you taking the screenshot).

Either way, all of the other bubbles show pretty well what it is supposed to look like. :)
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Busy Major MintyCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3429

Oh man. My other computer crashed and I lost everything. Now I have yet another new one and I'm going to have to start over AGAIN. But I'm not doing Desktop Ponies as much now. I'm too busy with RPG Maker projects. Shadowstar has been redesigned yet again, I'll post an image of her new look when I can.

Bow Hothoof (and Sphinx) download Bot-chanCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3435

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It's been a while since I've submitted something here, so here's a simple Desktop Pony of Rainbow Dash's dad:

https://sta.sh/013vwtwciizm

And I seem to have accidentally deleted the previous download for the Sphinx, so here she is again:

https://sta.sh/01yt4syfb47y

Enjoy :)


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Arma 3 Pony mod LyraPlushieeeCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3430[View]

I'm looking for this mod.

The creators lost the files and there's no backup available as it was only on workshop...

Does anyone still has It on their PC?


Fanfic in progress: help with some names? McBehrer!MBZYCuFtNgCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3209[View]

Hey guys!

Man, it sure is good to be back on this site. It must have been... 3, 4 years since the last time I was here?

Anyway, I am working on writing a fanfic, and I have a lot of ideas nailed down, but I would like to see if any of you could maybe help me out with some names.

I need:
A name for an art exhibit (themed around capturing moments from everyday life in Equestria, in a frank and realistic manner)

The creator of said art pieces. I'm looking for something that indicates his skill at sculpting -- particularly with marble -- and is maybe just a tiny bit suggestive.

Whatever Button Mash's mom's name is. I don't know if she has a particular name that is universally agreed-upon, but whatever it is, I want to know it.

Similarly, the name of a janitor. If there's a canon janitor, that would work (is Hayseed Turniptruck a character? I lost track of fanon after a while)

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McBehrer!!HmMTV1BJR3Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3279

>>3278
Yeah, either one is good. I can decide after I get suggestions. I was thinking of something like Marble Spire or something for the artist.

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RainstreamCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3388

It depends on the race.

Unicorns tend to have glittery, celestial, or adjective based names.

Earth ponies tend to have object based names relevant to their special talent.

Pegasi tend to have weather or flying based names, usually with a verb thrown in.

Bonus points if any of them form a pun or play on words
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Remembering: Sensual Stories Threads, The Collection SonicPony45Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3162[View]

Oh man, do I have a throwback post for you guys. Okay, a long time ago, back in the baby days of Ponychan, before the merger, before the drama and everything, this site used to be much larger with TONS of boards. It was litty. The year was 2011 and the Brony fandom was still in its infancy.

This board used to be called /fic/, because music, games and videos had their own boards. Me and a few other O.G's used to have a running thread called "Sensual Stories" thread. it was SO popular, we'd revise the thread everytime we reached 500+ posts. I mean, we were on like "Sensual Stories Thread #35" in just a few months, it was fucking huge.

The point was to create a single short story in as few posts as possible. Stories ranged from HOT to Awww and everything in between. They were romance stories, often told from 2nd person, and were very popular. We'd write our stories and review or critique each others work. It was awesome.

I made ALOT of friends on those sensual threads, and we accumulated many fans. We had haters who would tell us "clopping was wrong" and stuff, and it was understandable. See, this was back in the day when the creators of the SHOW would ACTUALLY come HERE to chat with us. We had artists, animators and even a few writers come to Ponychan and chop it up, so many were worried about what our stories were gonna do.

Anyway, the Sensual Stories Threads lasted for YEARS, but started dying in 2014~ When this site went redux, many boards got merged. Many cool secret boards and staff left (Staff used to be SO interactive with us, it was great), and them the merger happened and even more changed.

But my boi Sandman... he collected some of our FIRST works from the first 5 or so Sensual Stories Threads and put them in 6 PDF's. I literally made a DropBox account, JUST to share them. They have been in my SkyDrive (One Drive now) since 2012, and I just read some of our early works. He build a very nice book out of them, and added credits to the writers. It brought a tear to my eye as I read some of our works. I've been with this fanbase since day one and to see the names of all my fellow O.G's that are no longer on this site makes me miss the beginnings. Season 2 was still hyping up, Lauren Faust was still active on the show, this site had ALL the traffic, EQD was a fucking BABY site, bronies were SO creative, everyday was NEW user content. Music, flash games, animation and of course...sensual stories.. so here i
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I remember the sensual threads. Nice to see you back

PonySonic45Country code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3212

>>3168

Yeah, its been a minute for me. This site is much slower than the old days. I've been away into the Navy. I'm finishing up and going to go to college. My life has Def changed. I went from gang banging to sailor and now college student.

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You still have them?! Dude, you rock!


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Kabel teh Lewdy[FARMER]HobbitCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3107[View]

I made, an Elf Maiden

If anypony wanna edit her & create their own Elf~ go ahead/ I'm was just recoloring

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But... that's a pony!

Kabel teh Lewdy[FARMER]HobbitCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3111

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Updated

and, she is a Forest Warrior

AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 3145

Nice pony.


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Seed Comic AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2776[View]

Anyone interested in a comic where the CMC and a fourth filly wind up growing Cannabis?
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AnonymousCountry code: ponychan.png, country type: customflag, valid: 2795

>>2792
The story could actually be workable and produce feelz--I don't know how plausible it is in a magical land where everyone with a horn can make reality warp itself to suit his whims, but handled properly it is possible to make something good out of this. However it is unavoidable that you're going to get an awful lot of eye-rolling and "LOL WEED" reactions, because this kind of thing has been WAY overdone over the past ten, fifteen years, enough that just seeing it is going to leave a sour taste in a lot of people's mouths. It would have to be awfully well written to overcome that.

And yes, please practice your art. Especially eyes and faces.

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bruh, bruh, i get what you're trying to do, and i respect it, but it honestly feels like you're trying to force a narrative.

this anon
>>2795
has great points. however, i'd like to add that it really seems like you're a bit too gung-ho with this. there will be other stories, and comic about stoner fillies will seem silly in a year. if this really is your magnum opus, maybe take some time away from it and come up with a better reason why this pony's mom needs weed rather than say...magic.

your eating disorder thing is...okay, but it feels like it's a flimsy excuse to put weed into your story(no offense intended). the issue is that if you go with cancer, then you run into a whole host of issues relating to the tone of your comic. i don't think many people wanna read the cmc presents breaking bad except with weed.

if that's what you wanna do tho, go ahead, i'd at least be interested in checking out a page or two. but other people might call it out as being unnecessarily dark or that illegal drug dealing just doesn't work in a land where a literal god is their monarch.
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