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0/10
This song's stolen from General Mumble.

No, no you're dumb

What the fuck is this thread

>>17558
this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AR2qxkDkaBY

Relevant:

Songs: Ohia - Didn't it Rain
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WyGmGRNO37Y
http://www9.zippyshare.com/v/83834576/file.html

I actually cringed listening to this. It could use some work though. I suggest lowering the quality of the doors opening to sound like its actually in the track.

>>/oat/

I did a few stanzas myself, so I can relate.

You often sound nervous, out of breath, with a voice coming from throat to lungs, not from lungs to stomache. Practice and getting into a comfort singing zone, or recording when you are naturally in that zone will make it better.Or take a notch down in speed for starters.
Resonates with the music, well the idea of the execution I got, well enough for me. And I say, after a hasty beginning with some rhythm issues it got really better over the first minute once you got into a pattern.

What you'll of course need and I can recommend is something where you don't have to do one-takes, the more often you recite and hear yourself, the more chance to improve.
That's how I now even know a piece I wrote myself by heart, something I never did by just coming up and writing down.

if that is what comes about after few days, good job, keep at it.
What do you mean "learned it" a few days ago? Have you not been listening to music with rap and rapped along before?

>>17455
>I only started to learn how to rap a few days ago
Well that explains a lot. And actually that's a bit relieving. It would be scary the think that this video was a product of years of training. If there's one piece of advice that I can give you, it's to listen to rap. A lot of it. A lot of the times, the best way to learn is by imitation.

I have listened to rap before and I'm getting into it more and more xD I always sang along to songs and haven't really listened and got interested in rap until I heard some of the fandoms rappers

  Welp! There goes my entire life. Have a nice day.

  Oops! There it goes again.

  FML!!

  Not very familiar with funeral Doom, but I just heard this today and I'm really digging it

  >>17436
Funeral Doom is prolly better doom than most.

Check out Funeral.

  >>16976
Ah, that's a good band.

I've always been a fan of old death doom.
Speaking of which Dream Death isn't nearly as well known as they should be. Penance as well.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y3VvhlbENBc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u8y22OOBVQs

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What is it?

>>17413
Kinda interesting vaporwave.

Also it kept telling me to "go to sleep".

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http://www.mediafire.com/?ogdgpe5fffocbx9

>Listening to music

>even thinking "music" and "good" fall within the same galaxy

>>17390
The mind behind this is sharp enough I can tell, but the form is still in the student phase.

I like it, it's a nice starting point.

You need to learn more about composition though.

This is also coming from someone who knows shit about comp. I just know that a lot of this seems to be thrown together. The whole point of noise is to know how to compose music, to know how to compose a good melody and know good sound structure. Then to transgress. Noise is like musical Gnosticism, and you still need to find the Gnosis.

Keep trying though, for legit.

>>17393
>trying to sound smaert

>>17404
Would you believe I wrote that high on sleeping meds?

Last edited at Wed, Mar 13th, 2013 01:18

  >>17362
If you're into cash, you should check out Marty Robbins, Joan Baez and Ralph Stanley.

>tfw you finally realize you can't just hop down to the corner and buy a pack of cassette tapes any more

>>17398
>tfw you have to buy sealed cassettes online, because all used ones are old and dank as shit