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Not quite sure this is the best place for this, but if people want to make a writing request I'd be happy to take them. They're not commissions, i'm not asking for any bits just looking for something to do. Just head over here http://red-rover-fim.deviantart.com/#/d5a8idp and leave me a note or comment or just comment on here and get a hold of me.
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>> No. 115217
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Hm... I'm unsure whether or not to send you on over to the Moon Story Forge.

Anyway, surely someone else knows better than I about these matters.

However, I'd like to point out that information like:
1. Contact me somehow (note, email me, etc.) with a request for a fic you want written. I'd like to keep them relativity short. I'd hate to run out of stamina in the middle of a novel length fic.

2. Give me a timeline. (Don't be afraid to push me a little hard. I need the motivation and if you don't I'll give you one and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE hold me up to it at gunpoint if necessary.)

3. I'll accept just about anything for ideas with a few stipulations:

A. I don't like shipping but I'll still do requests if you ask, just nothing to crazy. I'll can try for regular to kawaii to D'awwabeetus level cute if you like.

B. I would really prefer not to do grim dark, I'm fine if it get's a dark, but please not to grimmy. it brings me to deep dark places

C. You can ship but, for the love of Celestia, no Clop. I've been smut free for 4 months now and I'd like to keep it that way. More deep dark places

D. Preferably FIM fiction, but I'll take whatever you got

should probably be in the OP (or, at the very least, something like "rules and stipulations can be found here." Anyway, I'm just being nitpicky... maybe. No matter! Here's an idea for you:

After the events of Return of Harmony, Chaos strikes again. This time it has not just subverted the bearers of the Elements, but split them into a subverted form of their character and an exaggerated/reinforced one (separate ponies, basically clones; can have slightly different coat color or other physical attribute to tell them apart). The fic would deconstruct both character extremes (the consequences of said extremes on the characters, their friends, and the environment at large) before concluding with the characters’ reconciliation with themselves and each other.

That good enough for you? Maybe? No? Bah, who needs ya. I kid.

Gonna leave a comment linking to this post in your blog just in case you aren’t watching /fic/.
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>>115217
Thanks for the rules bit, it is a good idea.

Don't know much about /fic/ nwn I live on /pic/ and /chat/ but please go on about Story Forge or the moon .

And one question about your idea. So each character would be, in a sense, split in 2. Each with an opposing extreme of their personality?
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>>115219
Story Forge can be found here: http://ponychan.net/chan/fic/res/106451.html (it's also the first link in the sticky, which is suggested, nay, required reading). I don't know too much about it myself, but if you posted there with a request for fic ideas I'm sure a few people might oblige.

As far as the idea I gave you, ya, that about makes sense. Each pony would be split into the "best" part of themselves and the "worst" part of themselves. Hopefully, that's something you can use.
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>>115240
Wait are you talking about putting all their negative aspects in one pony and all the good in the other? [/s] Like Metal Gear solid with Solid being the perfect one and Liquid being the imperfect[/s] But wouldn't that create a horrible character and one "perfect" character, turning the mane 6 into Mary Sues? And if so, why would they be compelled to join back with their imperfect self instead of just getting rid of them?
I've thought alot about it to day and I got some ideas, like might it work out better if perhaps even their good traits were so extreme that they became negative? ie: AJ is painfully honest and blunt, Rarity is so generous she gives away all her things, etc. If both halves are incapable of living on their own because of such a handicap it would force them to find a solution.

I really really really like your idea. It has real potential. I'm just tossing around some ideas.
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>>115285
>all their negative aspects in one pony and all the good in the other
>turning the mane 6 into Mary Sues

No. Whatever you do, don't make Sues.

>might it work out better if perhaps even their good traits were so extreme that they became negative?

Maybe. Double points if one is their perfect Element but bad at their talent/important character trait, and the other is the inverse of their Element but exceedingly good at their talent (e.g. AJ's strong but dishonest and week but honest, TS's smart but bad at magic and dumb but really good at magic, Rarity would be very artistic but greedy and completely uninspired but generous, &c.).

> If both halves are incapable of living on their own because of such a handicap it would force them to find a solution.

That's the idea and the only conflict I can figure making sense in that context.

Hope this helps.
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>>115339
>No. Whatever you do, don't make Sues.
Good, I didn't want to go there. xD

And, alright. I should have enough to get started working. I'll come back if I need to ask more questions
One more thing. Any timeline you want it done by / preferred length? It's a pretty big idea and I could go on for a while if I wanted. xD
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>>115342
Not sure what your writing speed is, so I'll just throw out an arbitrary date:

August 18 sound good to you?
>> No. 115420
>>115347
> August 18th
... *grabs pen and scribbles furiously* ON IT .w.
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>>115420
Tick. Tick. Tick...
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>>116282
*explodes*
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>>116657
Ahaha... shit....
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>>115347
Okie dokie.. welp.. ahha ha haaaaaa.. Yeah. Sooooo I'm not going to insult you by making excuses but I'm not finished yet. I feel really bad for being so lazy, but I do have a little done. I'd hate to do this empty handed.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L7VMlbPnLSAPFYWUl9K34MnX-IUn8uCoCUpke3ZicnI/edit?pli=1
It's a little over 1000 words and 10000 was my goal, but I still got a ways to go and it's looking like it's going to be longer than I thought =w= But don't you worry, I will keep at this and I WILL finish this, hopefully in a timely fashion. Trying to get it on FIM fiction but it's turning out to be harder than I thought so just a google doc link for now. I shall keep writing away and try to get it finished before the end of the month. Sorry. >.<
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>>116705
I said I didn't know your writing speed, so I just threw out a date that looked good. If you need till the end of the month, you'll have it.

New goal: 10,000 words by September.

This one'll be more "strict" than the previous deadline.

Good luck.
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>>116802
Yeah, I'm kinda learning my writing speed myself. Hence why I'm asked for requests to put on some pressure to test myself. It will be done.
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>>116802
>>116831

Alright, since somehow I've encouraged this, and, consequently, committed myself to it, I'll continue this little experiment.

Only a few more hours remain in August in CDT, so I hope you've finished those 10,000 words. To win is to have bragging rights; to lose is to sit in the corner in eternal shame.

Your deadline is 00:00 GMT, Saturday, September 1st. That's about ten or so hours from the time of posting, if I'm not reading my clock or calender upside down.

Hopefully when the sun peeks over the horizon tomorrow, you'll have something to be proud of under your head as you regain some lost sleep.

Surprise us.

If you do end up with a manuscript from this exercise, you'll have won anyway. The writing is oft the most difficult hurtle; editing and rewriting are usually minor in comparison to the mental turmoil of the rough draft.
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>>118234
Gah. I hate to have to do this, but I got to apologize again. I, again, failed you, and for that I'm very sorry. If this whole experience has taught me anything, it's that I have a long way to go, both in writing and in work ethic. However, It'd be nothing short of shameful if I didn't continue my work on your story, so I will press on until it comes to a conclusion. I'll keep my progress posted on FIM fiction here, http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45899/Return-of-Chaos , and will do my best to juggle school while keeping a good pace. Sorry again for disappointing you. I dissapointed myself as well if it's any constellation, but no point in me worrying about the past when there's still work to do. I'll try to keep you updated.
No manuscript, and no pride earned here. I haven't earned my chance to rest yet, so I'll keep working and I'll take it easy when it's over.
There's few things I dislike more than making a liar out of myself. =w=
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>>122525
I'm surprised this thread's still around to be honest.
>> No. 122529
>>122527
Bot bumped it >_>
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>>122529
Weird o_o
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Autosaged in case of further bot shenanigans.
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>>123243
Alright, thank you.
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