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Made a Blog post [www.fimfiction.net] about this, but it felt appropriate to make one here too.

Lately I've had trouble picking up a book and settling into it, or picking up a story, or reviewing stories like I used to, and for the longest time I couldn't figure out why. It's not that I don't love reading. I do. It's an incredible escape, and it can take you on grand adventures to far off worlds, all from the comfort of your own home. It's literally a fantasy, but I don't need to spend 500 words explaining to you why reading is so popular. The point is, I can't figure out what's so difficult about it. Once involved in a book, the world melts away, and I sometimes forget that I'm sitting on my couch, or my favorite chair, or that there's a cat curled up purring in my lap, or that there's a cup of black cherry tea growing colder by the minute on the side table next to me.

I think that the reason why it's so great is the same reason why I can't pick it up anymore. Reading takes you somewhere else. It almost literally takes you to a completely different world, where your problems don't exist, and wonderful people go on grand adventures, and you leave your entire existence behind. And I think that's the problem. Reading used to be a fun, relaxing experience for me, where I'd recharge from spending so much social energy. But now that life has gotten so crazy, I'm spending most of my energy not socializing so I can focus on my plan for the future.

What that has to do with reading is the fear of letting go. I'm fighting so hard to control my current situation, that I'm afraid if I let go of it I'm going to lose any stability I had. My mind can't seem to comprehend that I'm not actually leaving this world, and that things will actually be pretty much the same when I return. Every time I pick up a book, and stare through the portal of that brave new world, Iinger on the threshold, afraid to step through the portal and into another realm, b
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I used to read a lot more than I do now, and I think the reasons are roughly similar. I've got too much going on in the real world to feel comfortable dropping it all to spend my time reading. There's a fic I'm editing that I absolutely love. I think it's really well written, the story has me engaged, it has some great moments, and yet I can only just barely force myself to read a chapter over the course of several days. There was a time when I'd go through entire books in less time than that, barely able to pull myself from its pages. These days I have so many other things vying for my attention, things that I'm invested in and care about, that reading has fallen a bit behind on my priority list.


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128937 No. 128937 [View] [Last 50 posts]
#Reviewer #The Training Grounds
Previous thread: >>128053

Welcome one and all to the Training Grounds, the review thread authors and reviewers, both newcomers and seasoned veterans alike! With the closing of the spreadsheet, we’re going back to square one: just stories, reviews, and this thread right here. Things will be kept track of by hoof, wing, and/or claw with a listing every so often.

How to get a review: Post a story with its title, description, tags, and a link to it where applicable. Please include all of these in your post and not just a Fimfiction link to a title page.

How to review: Write what you think about a story (or review) and post it in a reply. Put a * in front of the subject field if you’d like your review reviewed.

List of unclaimed stories: >>129398

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Title: Turning Over a New Coat
Tags: Slice of Life, Comedy

Synopsis: “Long after the events of Boast Busters, and after getting kicked out of Ponyville more times than the number of stars on her hat, a rage-filled Trixie swears to learn about this ‘magical friendship’ nonsense once and for all, so that she’d finally have some real magic to show off. She starts off by painting herself lavender, and enlisting the help of a particular pink pony.”

Wordcount: 7800 only! :D
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1n2ftHxGf6ZVjZNqhrfPVYYdrRE2F3PRwSNfUMKLCgZE/edit?usp=sharing

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>>131333
Damn, I never even noticed that. I swear I've gone blind since last summer. I'm still gonna review this, but I think it's safe to say my eyes are nowhere near what they used to be.
>> No. 131337
>>131331
>>131332

Thank you for your time and feedback =)


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121064 No. 121064 [View] [Last 50 posts]
#Collection #Discussion

Here is a thread for people to post their recommendations so new people can get a general picture of the highlights of fiction in the fandom, or for people to ask for recommendations.

Rules:
1.) No self-promotion, your work should stand for itself and make others want to refer to it.
2.) Provide tags and some small additional information for people to know what they are heading into.

Suggestions:
1.) Do post on this thread and promoted works that deserve the attention.
2.) If you see people asking for recommendations, direct them here and ask them to delete their thread.

That is all.
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>> No. 131268
I'm writing a fic for my own amusement that features a lot of crossover and time travel stuff. Ditzy 'Derpy' Doo is in it and I thought it would be fun for the Doctor to show up at some point, but I don't have any idea how he's charactereized due to having never read any of the fics.

So I came here to ask about Doctor fics, specifically those featuring Derpy as a companion. Which are the better ones and/or those most entrenched in the fandom's collective conscious?

I've already found what I understand to be the 'original' Derpy companion fic, My Little Time Lord:
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/6700975/

>>121554
This one is also a Doctor fic, linked twice on this page at that, so I'll check it out too.

Any others?

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>> No. 131329
I think heard about a headcannon once about Rainbow Dash leaving school or running away or something like that when she was younger. Any suggestions?
>> No. 131330
>>131329
Involve Gilda.


No. 128883 [View] [Last 50 posts]
#Reviewer

As everyone should know by now, Equestria Daily has gone almost exclusively to short bullet-point reviews, except in cases where only a small number of items need to be corrected for posting. I enjoy giving longer reviews, but can no longer do so through Equestria Daily, so I will post them here. I will only do so for stories that in my estimation would have passed the old automoon system; others will get only the bullet-point treatment in the email.

This thread is only for the authors in question and me. They are free to ask questions or ask me to remove their reviews from the thread for any reason. For any other traffic, I will ask a mod to delete it. General questions about Equestria Daily or the pre-reading process should be posted here:
>>128414

Note that I won't give an exhaustive list of errors; I'll provide a representative list of the types of problems I find and leave it to the author to scour his story for the rest.

To avoid repeating myself, I'll post a few of the more common discussion topics up here; your review may refer you to one or more of these.

Dash and hyphen use:
Hyphens are reserved for stuttering and hyphenated words. Please use a proper dash otherwise. They can be the em dash (Alt+0151) with no spaces around it or en dash (Alt+0150) surrounded by spaces. Some usage (primarily American) employs only the em dash, while other usage (primarily British) employs an em dash for cutoffs and an en dash for asides. It doesn't matter which system an author uses, as long as he is consistent.
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>> No. 131315
Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

>guestroom//
Two words.

>your highness//
The honorific would be capitalized.

>princess//
As a term of address, this would be capitalized.

>of consternation//
>> No. 131325
Note that this list is not comprehensive. I picked out a few examples of each kind of error or problem I found. Of course, not everything is a black-and-white issue; this is not a list of things you have to fix, but take each under advisement.

This may be a long enough list to seem intimidating. It really isn't. I was very thorough, and a lot of this is multiple instances of the same things. There's more of an explanation in the wrap-up comments at the end, but first, I want to make it clear that I want to see this story come back so I can post it.

>whole blocks of buildings laid dark and deserted//
Lay/lie confusion. You want "lay" here. "Laid" requires a direct object.

>Shops had cheerfully opened during the day, catering to last-minute shoppers and decorators. But their doors closed early, and their workers were retired to their own homes and parties.//
You basically already said this. In fact, the "were retired to their own homes" part is a direct repetition.

>The illusion would be ruined in a moment upon peering inside.//
I'm seeing a fair amount of passive voice already, not to the point that I'd say it's off-putting yet, but keep it in mind. Most of them would be easy to rephrase in an active manner.
>> No. 131326
Okay, wrap-up time. I get that he realizes Celestia's involvement, but thank her for what? Giving the opportunity or the encouragement to do something good? Or that she somehow motivated Blueblood to pay him all that money?

I know this looks like a lot. Really, it isn't. It's a bunch of instances of a small number of problems noted over and over. I've pointed them all out and said exactly how to fix them. The bulk of this will be no more than an editing pass. I've tried to remove the pain as much as possible, because I like this story and want to expedite it to get posted by Christmas if I can. That part's up to you. If you can get it fixed up within the next few days, it'll probably happen.

The only things that will take a bit of thought to work out are these: the instances of telly language, the jumping perspectives, and the mismatched opening scene. Really, that last one is the only one that'll take much thought. If you'd had a narrator break in with that tone throughout the story, it'd work, but it just sticks out like a sore thumb as is. You could easily convey the same information in a style more in keeping with the rest of the story.

For reference, there's a little more information at the top of this thread on some of the topics I've brought up. Specifically, I'd point you to the sections on dialogue punctuation/capitalization, comma use with conjunctions, and head hopping.

The last thing I'll add is that this story uses a lot of "to be" verbs. They're inherently boring. It's much more interesting to read about things that happen, not that just are. Of the easier forms to search on, I counted 352 in the story, which is a rate of about one every other sentence. You'd really benefit from making more active verb choices. This can work even when there's not actually any motion, as in "He sat there" versus "He was there." One helps keep the story moving. The other brings the action to a halt. Now, it didn't grate on me too badly, except in a couple of places where I encountered clumps of them, so in the interest of time, I'll just ask you


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131257 No. 131257 [View]
#Author #Normal

Tell me why I'm bad

This pic isn't related at all but it's cute so whatever
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Without having read the story in this question:

>>131267
> What benefit does it serve to describe picking apart a rock pile.
Because it gives every action some importance to the situation. Plus it sounds like there's some serious telling going on, and not a lot of showing.

> If the only relevant bit is the fact that he did it, then that's all you need to say.
The difference between reading a story, and watching a TV show, is that information is conveyed differently in both mediums.

In this case, the reader can learn about a character in the way they interact with the world. In a visual medium we have cues you can send to show how a character does any action. In prose you pretty much place importance only on things you focus on. If you don't focus on anything, it's just floating heads talking at each other until it's over.

> If we just wanted cute little cartoon horses without any curiosity towards other possibilities, we would just watch the damn show.
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After having read it:

>>131257
In a prologue of some 'thing', two floating heads converse, one of whom is recognizable as an important back story character until magic happens.
The second one, 'Lynn' makes me wonder if you know how pony names work.

This is a prologue. It has the basic problem a number of prologues have in assuming that as a reader I'll care because I'm already reading.
It starts well, but then nothing of any importance happens, and a thing flashes, and it ends.

Am I being unfair? Fuck yeah, you wasted my time reading a thing that has no signs of pay off, about two characters I couldn't rub enough damns together to even start to connect with.

It's Starswirl:Origins, and it starts off in a fashion that I have difficulty connecting to my own interpretations of Starswirl, as well as making him a selfish, self centered character fixated on his future importance.
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>>131267
I often refer to myself as a mirror around here, because that's basically what I do: I show you what you can't see yourself based on the fact that you are you. If you don't like what you see in the mirror, don't blame the mirror. Just put some damn makeup on.

>If the only relevant bit is the fact that he did it, then that's all you need to say.
If you think that "a pony moved a rockpile" is all that's relevant then you've got a lot to learn about compelling characters. Minty's hit it on the head. You can learn a lot about a character by how they interact with the world around them. In fact, that's pretty much how you learn about anyone, short of being told. And as we all know, telling in writing is bad.

Say you walked into a room and saw a desk covered in stuff.
What do you know about the owner of the desk? Well, obviously they use it, so... they do a lot of work? might be a workaholic? No, we can't conclude that. Maybe it's stuff that's sat there forever and never been touched, or maybe it's just temporarily there as they clean it out. We don't know. We haven't been told. We know almost nothing about this character.

What if we were told the desk had crumpled papers lying in a horseshoe around a legal pad filled with words across the front page, and a pen placed at an angle next to it.
What can you tell me about the owner of the desk now? Your imagination fills in the implications based on the knowledge it's given.


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I have a bunch of oc's with deep personalities and backstories, I have a basic idea (Slice of life/comedy)
Is sitcomfic with only everyday conflict boring? I just need your opinion.
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>> No. 131275
>>131273
Hell yeah you should.
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>>131271
Is that where that joke came from?
>>103290
>Any fics involving Snails, a rock, and a hill, need not apply.
I think I'd like to see the original post.
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>>131277
If I remember it was a chatroom thing in origin.

It all exploded over in this thread though.
>>69377
You've got Snailsyphus, Destiny, and Snails & The Rock in their prototypical forms, with reviews.


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131251 No. 131251 [View]
#Author #Single fic #Discussion #Normal #Crossover #adventure

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/230643/digipony-adventures-01
I worked hard on this chapter, and I would like to continue this story, please give me feedback.
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>> No. 131255
>>131254
It would help you understand the premise of the story, I set up my villains the same way and I forgot to mention that I put a lot of digimon names and attacks with out explaining them so you'd have to look them up on this site
http://digimon.wikia.com/wiki/Digimon_Wiki
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This is odd. I think I'm one of four people in position to actually give feedback on this story. You have a very small target audience that could actually understand this story, and there will will most likely be one that just wants you to continue blindly until you burn yourself out.
That group being readers that like the CMC, and Diamond Tiara, and Silver Spoon, and have an in depth knowledge of Digimon that they don't have to google search every paragraph to know what's going on.

So I can say that I'm pretty sure there's a core idea at work here. If that idea is not just Digimon Adventure with names replaced with ponies, I'll be overjoyed.

But I have problems with things here.

Right now, you're just doing Digimon Adventure plot wise. And you're doing it badly.
You have nine title characters (two more than DA at the same point), plus digimon which pushes right to eighteen main characters, plus villains which puts the number around twenty five, which is way more than even an experienced writer can handle.
In the style which you've decided to do the prose, none of the characters are allowed to have character. They might as well just be name shifted blank slates.
Even Adventure (which I have to compare it to) used it's first episode to establish the world. By first episode, I mean the first movie, which is both In Media Res, and establishes the rules without having the characters stop and explain them to the viewer.
The first tv episode stops to review the characters, giving the reader an idea of who each character is without stopping to explain the engine to the reader.
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>>131255
sounds like a story issue. The best crossovers have references that can be recognized and laughed at by fans of the crossed over material, but present them in a way that they can be understood by readers not previously familiar with them. You'll need to work on that.

There. Feedback. Combine that with just about everything Minty said, and you might be in business.


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#Discussion #Normal

Hi everypony. I was wanting to discuss the topic of the bat ponies. I'm not that well enlightened on their details, but I would love to explore these fascinating creatures.
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>> No. 131231
Here's a quick thought - what if the changelings were actually allied to greater threat? Like how the dwarves accidently unearth the Balrog of Morgoth. What if the Earth Ponies accidently awakened a creature and the changelings allied with it?

I picture this evil dragon like beast, twisting and coiling in the dark recesses of the Deep Veins.
>> No. 131232
I picture this being the model for the ancient city of Aphal-Khôr: http://www.cinemablend.com/images/gallery/s19079/dragon_age__origins_12495754306171.jpg
>> No. 131233
Could this be an alternate version of Canterlot?
http://features.cgsociety.org/newgallerycrits/g66/566/566_1174967532_large.jpg


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103290 No. 103290 [View] [Last 50 posts]
#Reviewer #Crossover #Seattle_Lite #Nicknack
Welcome to the meat grinder, the thunderdome, the jungle, the ninth circle of... yadda, yadda, yadda. This is a review thread, and it features two of the oldest and best, in our obviously humble and totally unbiased opinion reviewers on /fic/. We’re happy to help, but you should probably meet us halfway. So, without further ado, have some...

RULES
FORMATING:
Your post submission should include: Title, Genre Tags, a Synopsis, Word Count, and a Link to the story. We strongly prefer Google Docs. If you give us a picture of words, get fucked Don’t send us pictures of text.

Failure to submit properly will be met with swift retribution. You probably won’t get a review, certainly not from Seattle.

CONTENT:
Anything not allowed on Ponychan (gore, porn, all that good stuff) is not allowed to be posted in this thread. If you have something that falls outside of the acceptable content guidelines of Ponychan, you can email it to either of us, but the review will be done in private. If we hate it, we get to let you know without Ponychan mod intervention. Granted, as you’re probably showing us dicks in this scenario, so that’s a fair trade. Any fics involving Snails, a rock,
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Autosage should be removed
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>>129902
>>129900
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>>105879

>mfw I actually made this post


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#Discussion

For those of you that use this board, how would you feel about it being merged with another?

The reason for this idea is that a majority of this boards regulars are condensed into only a few threads, which could easily fit into another board's community without major upheaval.
This would also have the benefit of giving new threads a wider audience.

The current plan i have is to merge with /art/ and /collab/ into a single board (With a tentative name of /fan/, for lack of any other ideas) , but i'm making all three of these threads simultaneously so that plan is subject to change.

Another benefit to merging with those two boards in particular is that /art/ could provide inspiration for authors, while /collab/ may need a creative writer for whatever project is posted.

In any case, discuss the pros and cons of the idea in this thread.
I'll give fair warning before THE RECKONING happens, if it does at all.
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Kind of off-topic (sorry), but does anyone know any good online writing communities for non-fanfic which operate like old /fic/ did?
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>>131206
Reddit, most likely, has several sub-reddits that would fit your needs.

>>131195
I never did get a Vindictive (tm) review from you.
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>>131195


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131197 No. 131197 [View]
#Discussion

I've started reading MLP fanfics recently. Posters here (on the Internet, I mean) seem to have a propensity for pouring hate and vitriol on things they don't like. Since this only leads to derailments and drama, I had an idea, and I hope others will follow my lead.

I'm going to post about some fics I've read, and then say a little bit about each one, ending with a conditional recommendation. I'm not going to say anything bad about a fic; I will only be descriptive and say what I liked about them.

If you want to post about a story someone already spoke of, feel free to do so, if you have something positive to add about it.

It's important to note that when I refer to 'quality of writing' I mean things like paragraph and sentence structure, grammar and word choice, NOT things like the premise or the story structure.

I'll limit it to one story per post.

Pic unrelated.
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the spiderses

It made me laugh pretty hard, especially when the author randomly slipped into GOOD grammar.

It had a quality of writing. By the rules of this thread, I can say no more about it.

Recommended for a laugh.

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>> No. 131204
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The Conversion Bureau: First Contact

Conversion Bureau stories involve the world of Equestria coming into contact with the real world. This story explored what the event of their coming into contact might be like.

Like most (or all) TCB stories, this one takes place somewhere in the near future, after mankind has ravaged Earth. It casts mankind in a very negative light. That's not a comment on the quality of the story, just a description of its contents.

The story only touches on the Conversion Bureau concept towards the end. Most of the story concerns the titular first contact scenario, which I enjoyed reading about. Celestia is depicted here as a savvy statesman, and it's fun to watch.

Quality of writing is pretty decent.

I can only recommend this if human stories are your thing, or if you have a penchant for first contact scenarios, like I do.
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My Little Dashie

I just read this one today. It's a sad story, but it's the kind of sad that makes you feel better about life - and yes, that's a thing, it's why tearjerker movies are such big business. Watching sad movies or reading sad books can make you feel less depressed.

It's also crass, self-indulgent wish fulfillment, but note that I don't consider that a bad thing.

I've seen some people say the environment in which the protagonist lives is contrived, but I was definitely thinking of Detroit while reading it. Detroit is seriously a lot like that, you guys. And living alone and in misery is not even remotely unrealistic; I honestly think that has something to do with the brony phenomenon in general.

So, a lot of people are going to sympathize with the protagonist, a younger adult who lives alone working a dead-end job.

This is a very short fic. I do consider that a positive here.


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131168 No. 131168 [View]

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/165655/love-songs-and-butterflies

Hey ya'll. ok, so I got done with this fic a week ago. I'm really looking for some extra support. Perhaps a review or a YouTube fanfic reading? Just a few suggestions ^-^ looking forward to hearing from ya'll

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>> No. 131184
>>131182
These are actually problems that I struggle with, and I thank you for your help. :) I'll see what I can do
However, I'm making up my mistakes through a short fic. I actually got myself a proofreader for this next one :)

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>>131184
And all taken from the first chapter of your story, I might add. I only caught the author's note at chapter three because I was looking specifically for it. I hope I've made my point that an experienced set of eyes doesn't need to read your entire story to point out it's largest flaws.

That said, as you begin to make less mistakes, you'll begin to find that your reviewers and editors are forced to read more of your story to understand its flaws. It's at this point that you can give yourself a small pat on the back, and continue moving forward.

As always, good luck, and never stop writing.
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>>131184
I'm glad you're up to the part where you don't listen anyways.
It lets me know when my time is being wasted effectively.

At least your tags don't suck this time. What do I mean?
You know which tags don't work on Love Songs? Mane 6-Angel-DJ Pon3-OC.

The youtube link out of the box is tasteless. So tasteless I'm actually opting out of reading this.

Entirely.

Congrats. I'm sure it's worth something being able to terrify me out of looking at a fanfic without resorting to twincest or bloodsport.


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#Discussion

Just thought of something that might make for a good fic.

In Rainbow Rocks, the sirens need Equestrian magic to regain their full power. But Twilight just leaves the portal wide open the entire time. So what if the sirens walked right into Equestria, absorbed their fill of magic, destroyed the portal machine so Twilight couldn't get back, and wreaked havoc on Equestria again?

Just an idea.
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It sounds like a concept with no attached story.
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>>131179
It is!
>> No. 131183
ounds like an excellent concept. But ideas are cheap. I say write it.


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130396 No. 130396 [View]
#Author #Collection #Discussion

I figured as deadslow as this board is, me discussing things I'm working on here can't hurt. I'll just post my thoughts on my current works, past works, future projects, etc, as they come to me. Feel free to jump in, though I realize I'm not exactly critically acclaimed. I shall return to this thread continuously as I go about my incessant pony scribblings, to see what may be gleaned from any discussions arising here.

About me: Well, I'm a darkfic addict, so I really love to see creativity with those, as opposed to just gore for gore's sake. I'm also very cruel as a writer, and tend to seek out every bit of despair I can draw from a character. It's quite fun, actually. I love forcing characters to make impossible choices.

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>> No. 130399
And the stuff I'm still tirelessly working on, hoping to someday post for everypony to enjoy.

A Really Bad Story [www.fimfiction.net]
What started as a joke, combined with frustration and discouragement, actually turned into something, and I do intend to finish it eventually. I’m sure Shoeblock—assuming he’s still around—will remember when a disgruntled anon dropped this little ditty off in the Training Grounds back in January 2013. Appearing to be a deliberate troll fic, or an elaborate test for reviewers, this story took every mistake listed in Ezn’s story guide, and abused them with vengeance. It was meant to be silly, but actually became something.

A plot unfolded before my eyes, and I saw that perhaps it could be an attempt by Scootaloo to discover her writing talent. The second chapter was born, and I had a real story on my hands, as Scootaloo ran first to Rainbow Dash, then to Twilight for writing advice, and the story began to run away with me.

It was halted when too many ideas popped into my head, and I wanted to work on bigger stories, but I do plan to bring this out of hiatus perhaps before 2015.

Grace in Equestria [www.fimfiction.net]
I’m really, really, really sorry to everyone who saw this when it first showed up in TTG, and Fimfiction. I had a whole plot written for this, and have been retconning in all the new changes with the comic and with the show, but I’ve just been far too distracted to continue this, and it’s just been sitting on the backburner.
>> No. 130400
A few of the ideas in my head haven’t even made it to rough draft yet, because I wasn’t able to work out the kinks in the plotline enough to find them suitable. The faults in here are pretty obvious, but who knows, maybe some discussion will reveal a few of them worth making.

Flying Blind
This one turned up in a thread on Tumblr, where someone had whited out Sweetie Belle’s eyes. Sweetie Belle has started reading magic books from Twilight’s library, and decides to try some spellcrafting of her own. Attempting a “see in the dark” spell, she accidentally turns her entire world dark, permanently, and must now rely on her magic to “see”. (She can’t physically see anything, but she can sense where things are.)

Sweetie Belle has been boasting her magical talents, and Scootaloo becomes jealous. She heads off into the everfree, looking for a decent cliff to jump from, in the hopes that her wings will catch some wind. Rainbow Dash hears about Scootaloo’s disappearance and heads off to search for her, and eventually finds her trapped in a dark cavern—too dark to see anything. Sweetie Belle has to guide Rainbow Dash through the cavern to rescue Scootaloo.

This never took off because the plot is too loosely arranged, and seems to pull Scootaloo and Rainbow Dash out of left field. On top of that, I never figured out how to end it.

Who
This draws its inspiration from the season two episode “Owl’s well that ends well”. A year behind Twilight at Princess Celestia’s School for Gifted Unicorns, an aspiring young stallion not only idolizes our favorite lavender unicorn, but has a huge crush on her. When Twilight graduates and moves away, he’s devastated, but doesn’t really know where she’s gone. After doing some research, he discovers she’s in Ponyville, and decides to go after her. Buuuuuut, he’s gotten himself suspended, and grounded, for sneaking into the royal library.
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Change [www.fimfiction.net]

I guess this one has been a long time coming, but once I sat down to write it, it didn't take very long. In this story, Twilight serves as the vessel for the emotions a lot of us sometimes feel when the things we love change drastically, or simply die out. Yes, this story is written about /fic/, but it is also written about a few other things in my life. Old /fic/sters may recognize a few parallels I made, and if you must ask, I'm not sure if I'm represented by Applejack or Pinkie. Either way, the poem mentioned is one I wrote a long time ago, but I guess it just took Ponies for me to finally give it enough life for its message to reach me.


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