I use Sonar and Audacity, actually. I like using Audacity for voice, and Sonar for singing. Audacity picks up my voice very quietly, though, so I'd have to boost it. I'll see what I can do!
I have a bit of a sore throat right now because apparently my summer cold is a relentless jerk, but it should be fully cleared up soon enough.
As for changing the song, I don't mind too much, as long as the lyrics and basic concept are kept. I'm in no way a musician, I'm much better at drawing, writing, and voice acting (singing included) than anything else I can do, so I'm fine leaving suggestions up to you guys. I really just sang what I thought sounded nice.
I'm currently re-working the muffin and bubble lines, I want to include them somehow but let them at least fit.
Do you think I should add on to
I.... I know just what I can do!
They’ll say ‘there’s no stopping you’
And put the muffins and bubbles lines on a new set of lines?
If that doesn't interfere too much with reworking in the music, that is.