Dark colors (gray, black) contrasted with glaringly over-saturated (yellow, red) ones? Not usually (read: ever!) a good idea.
Also, Ponycreator? Really? On /art/? Standards are low enough in this fandom that just about anyone's hand-drawing is acceptable because at least they put time and effort into it.
What about the team he plays for? Do his colors reflect that at all? With fate basically reflected in both their names and colors at birth, most ponies would probably resemble their fate in some way.
Gonna need more than a ponycreator pic with the phrase "Es Linebacker" to actually give a good bit of advice on this. Did you put any thought into it beyond pick colors, gender, and profession, like, say, A NAME?!
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