>>261687
She also didn't get more than the equivalent of 2 minutes of screen time before dying like a bitch

I guess that's better than Aradia

>>261698
i don't understand any of this

>>261705

Which once again fits the hipster and underground theme.

>>261702

>>261702

That's weird, he was just here a minute ago.

>>261708

>>261694

>>261691
Pony-craziness doesn't lasts more than 5 months. Believe me.

>>261699
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digimon

Digimon (デジモン Dejimon?), short for "Digital Monsters" (デジタルモンスター Dejitaru Monsutā?), is a Japanese media franchise encompassing digital toys, anime, manga and video games. The franchise's eponymous creatures are monsters of various forms living in a "Digital World", a parallel universe that originated from Earth's various communication networks.

>>38123781
because fuck you thats why
>red walks in and sits next gintoke and stares at him with that "i hope you die in a fire" look on his face.

>>38123781
Come round here often?
>She sips her wine.
>>38123833
>She also points at the #chill tag, or at least her player does so and notes that fighting will not be accepted. At all.

>There really isn't much better than to go out and get a few drinks, maybe even meet some new ponies, and call it "work" is there? She just has to make sure to take notes on her surroundings, as well as to not drink so much she can't remember what she saw there.

>Even from the moment she enters the bar, she keeps an eye out for things like the size of the room, seating arrangements, the sorts of ponies that seemed to frequent the place...it takes a few minutes before she finally settles down in an empty seat at the bar with a good view of the rest of the bar.

>>38123777
>He chuckles, looking over the floor, such a waste of coffee.

Don't worry, I got it cutie~

>He takes his unused shirt and uses it to wipe the coffee, his strong arms and back exposing really good.

>>38123801
>She couldn't help but stare at the man while he was cleaning
I could help you if you'd like...

>>38123831
>He looks up to her, a cockish smile on his face.

If you insist~

>>38122952
No clue, or who that is sorry.

>>38122964
Sorry...
It's the person who made the pony generator.
It's friggin' awesome.

>>38122979
Indeed it is 8I havent used it i foreever though

>>37766189
Oh hell yeah. I love that movie. Hmmm. The girl was far more awesome wasn't she?

Fun fact from being a comic book geek: Hit-Girl is actually getting her own comic soon.

Oh God, you poor creature, here, this will ease the pain...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PkNLzoTV_Zw

>>39644298
Oh, I see. I that what you mean by "out of the circle"?

>>39644301
Not really sure what to make of this.... Goodnight.

>>39644298
ohai again how are---oh friend trouble??

>>39644281
I said horror in general, not just surrealist stuff. Marble Hornets is more like Blair Witch meets early Halloween.

Though speaking of surrealist stuff, this is sorta one reason why I'm watching more Tim and Eric lately (gotta love purposely weird editing and skits that can go from funny to nightmare fuel fast).

>>39644280
Yeah, so I've heard, but I'm so used to being busy that I feel a little nervous when I'm not kept busy.

weeell, but, how are you??

>>39644294

It takes getting used to for sure.

But just keep in mind, it's a good change of pace for a busy body. Y'know?

You'll just feel that much better if you rest up for the work ahead.

>>39644243
I agree, writing depressing pieces of literature is a very good way to release all of your negative feelings, very few can actually 'write out' their emotions and actually create a good piece while at it.

>>39644207
I guess it's a gift. But why am I soo bothered by it?

>>39644241
Thank you for the compliment. I'm just worried if im a ticking time bomb

>>39644276

>"write out" their emotions

Then like why is my emotion always about death, grimdark, suicide?

I always struggle if I try to stray away with it

Like for instance, I tried to write about a girl that has me by the heart...
...I couldn't get passed the first stanza

Sneek peek

His tail is just just curing so thats why its being held up by that big clay turd.

Will get better pics later!

>>86028
>>85632
Very, very impressive.
I like what I see.

>>86028
8O He's so good! I think if his mane were more 3D like his tail then he'd be perfect.

>>86346
A race that griffins have a mythologically-based hatred of? So... switch my story about griffins and ponies out for a story about griffins and horses?

>>86349
Humans and elves?

>>86346
Also, this.

>>37766316

>>37766316

Gotta go. See yall later.

>>37766256
>not Raven

>>37766256

>>37764584
>pic related

>>4710
>Implying Mac doesn't give EVERYpony alcohol..
>>4709
Hey, Goku. How's things?

>>4720
What?
>>4716
>Pic

>>4723
Things are things.

Review acknowledged. Sorry for the late delay.

>>83328
In the interest of (my) time, instead of giving a sweeping line-by-line like I normally do, I'm just going to tell you what I think of it. In other words, I'm skipping straight to the overall part. Kind of. This is all just my opinion. Take it with a pinch of salt.


What I think at the time of reading:
The title of the chapter sounds too similar to Feeling Pinkie Keen.
Wow. Every sentence has its own paragraph. Might want to combine them.
What's a Goozim? I've watched somewhere between ten and twenty episodes of Phineas and Ferb, but I have no idea what this is.
I can't tell what's going on or where they are. I see lava and robots and a column, but nothing else.
Dimension? What?
You're showing us what Perry thinks. You might want to show us what he sees.
It's at this point that I realized had I not watched at least between ten and twenty episodes of Phineas and Ferb, I would have stopped reading after a few sentences.…

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>> 83749

This is the crossover I saw on EqD and have always been meaning to read, although I never got around to it. Now I have the chance to. Sweet! Congrats on getting on EqD btw.

First off, the only reason your story has taken so long to review is because people saw the 55k word tag and ran away, not realizing that you only wanted one chapter to review. Since the chapter itself is only 2.6k, the TTG apologizes for the slow response. As such, I will review this chapter and help you to the best of my ability. That being said, I'm a human being so I probably made a few mistakes myself. But hey, it's all good right? Again, I apologize for the wait.

For the sake of the review, I turned on some Chrono Trigger music while reading it, because hey, it's supposed to fit. I know you're not supposed to add music links to your story though, it makes some people angry. I did this of my own free will, so it's all good. Anyway, I have played Chrono Trigger, so the scene is familiar with me. After reading chapter twelve, I'm going to go back and read the rest.

Small note for Gdocs: The unique font, especially bolded kinda makes it hard on the eyes. The funny thing is that the FIMFiction links don't have bolded words. :o I decided to just read that version first, although I'm aware that FIMFiction doesn't have the same formatting sometimes. I'll end up reading both just because.

Most of your review is done in-doc, but I'll mention a few notes here anyway.
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1-ACDC-Highway to Hell

2- Kick out the Jams- Tubthumper (lol)

3-Ready to Die-Andrew W.K. (fits pretty well)

4- The City Surf- Jamin Winans ;___;

5-Guile Theme

6-Careless Whisper-George Michael (perfect)
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>>4193
Scratch off my first song, first song would be Explosivo-Tenacious D

>>4189
>Cradle of Filth.
constanza.jpg

>>4706

>>4704
May be interesting, Nemesis in the Greek Mythology was the Goddess of vengeance
>hence why when I was referring to changes I was referring to Nemesis Prime as an "It"
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nemesis_(mythology)

>>4722

Oh, sweet. I can dig it.

>>751906

>>751908

[X] The Legend of Zelda: Toldlight Princess
[X] A Wrinkle in Told
[X] Artoldmes Fowl
[X] The Last Toldlympian
[X] Ben Tolds
And that is all I have to contribute.

"sorry, we don't serve subatomic particles here"
A neutrino walks into a bar

Great, you've ruined one of my favorite jokes with your science. *goes off to find new jokes*

[X]Mortold Kombat
[X]Toldsef Stalin
[X]Toldimir Lennin
[X]Niktoldla Tesla

>>36220032
*gasp* are you calling pinkie an alcoholic?

>>36220034
I don't think these people understand why she wouldn't be able to return...

Who says choosing between friends and family needs to be a painful choice? You choose your friends. You can stop being friends if they are mean to you. The same doesn't hold true for family members.

Sometimes, leaving daddy or mommy forever is as simple as picking them out in the police lineup and testifying truthfully. ^_^

...seriously, folks, families can be bucking horrible cesspits of abuse and cruelty.

>>4696
I guess it was a night fitting for you, then?

>>4697
Too....... Much........4Chan.......

>>4703
God gracious...

Anyways, reply deployed. Painfully.